thanks for that, im awful when it comes to showing anyone anything I have written, honestly it just strikes fear into my heart. I think its usually because I just reckon its rubbish lol.
I reckon I might have to take you advice and really let a few people hear it to comment and suggest. I find it a bit demoralising handing in stuff to my supervisor, cos although shes so kind she also is very honest and when u get it back covered in corrections etc well it takes me often quite a few days to look at it...sometimes I put it in my office drawer and continue with my other chapter.. I know head in sand...thats me