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Hello!
In preparing for this viva, I've just experienced a 'light bulb' moment on how I could really improve my lengthy thesis, give it a real back bone and cut out some of the extra detail in my literature review chapters. I completely agree with my sups comments that due to it's length, in some parts, the thesis is far too detailed which ends up losing the reader (despite my attempts to link everything back to research aims).
Given that I have 2 weeks until my viva, do you think it's too close to the viva to start thinking about integrating this potential change?
I think this change in emphasis really helps nail the underlying theme and 'thread' within my thesis. I've mentioned it within my submitted thesis, but I think it makes sense to place a greater emphasis for the resubmitted draft (for a PhD hopefully).
What do you think? I'm thinking this would be a good way of highlighting a technique I could use to improve my thesis and reduce my thesis considerably. Perhaps an example of 'acknowledged limitations and plans for resubmission'. I'm thinking of ways that could summarise my thesis in a few sentences and I think this potential change will really help with clarifying some of my thesis arguments.