hi....i am an international student planning to apply for a PhD in USA....i am working currently on my personal statement but i have a problem of organization...i started the essay by describibg the obstacles i faced to get to pursue the degree...the 2nd para.describes the skills i gained from my job..the next 3 talks about my areas of interests..the last one about the reasons of choosing this specifi university+my goals.......i dont know how to move from each para. to the other smoothly??the thesis sentence also??i dont know how to make it combine all the topics in the body and at the same time goes smoothly with the introduction?? thanks in advance for any piece of advice