my advisor to be has said she will send it back with comments later today. Am nervous that I have gone about it all the wrong way, but then there doesn't seem to be any way that anyone can tell you to go about it! I'm in Australia so it is like the British system.
Got it back and she said it was strong! There are a few bits I need to sort out, but nothing too major. Once it is approved it has to go through the bureaucratic process, but I should get in now.