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Masters dissertation query
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The only caveat I would add to this though BonsaiClouds is that some supervisors will take a particular focus when they read your work, despite what you ask for from them. You can have any number of conversations with them about what you would like them to support you with and you will still get what you get.

My second supervisor, for example, can't help herself-her focus will always fall straight away on any proof mistake or typo or formatting and presentation issue. She has a mind like an editor. She is an absolute guru on APA 5 (but hadn't updated into 6 last time we discussed things). So, for example, she is finishing reading 'the beast' (my pet name for the thesis), and I know, I just know, all the feedback will be on presentation. And I suspect there will be some APA 5 versus APA 6 issues (I'm using 6 and I am not going back to 5 so we may have to agree to disagree on that one).

Not every supervisor is like this and you are right, you need to ask, and if you don't ask, chances are you won't get. Good questions btw. Cheers, I'm now going back into a netflix binge, while I wait ...and wait...and wait...it's got to be sometime soon now surely. Hope things are going well for you Helebon.


Of course - it depends on the supervisor. You can't force them to give you the feedback you want. What I'm saying is it doesn't hurt to ask.

Morgan
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It really does suck to work so hard on something and to not get what you hoped for, but sometimes it happens and you have to roll with it. An MPhil is nothing to sniff at, anyway.



Yes but there's also other things to consider, such as that sometimes incorrect decisions are made. There are people on here who have successfully challenged their PhD result and won - some of these went to court. Use the search bar at the top of the forum to try and find these topic threads.

There's also the fact that some international students have to pay back their funding if they don't get the PhD and this can be £150k or more.

So it's not as simple as an MPhil is still a good degree. It may be, but it wasn't the objective, so no one is going to be happy with it.


Note that the bit you quoted was after I'd talked about appeals processes and in the case that they don't work out...

Of course if he thinks he has a legitimate case he should challenge it - and I wish him the best of luck in that - but there's no guarantee it will work.

Morgan
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I'm not qualified to give you any real advice, but my opinion is that you should try any appeals processes that are open to you, and if that doesn't work, try and move on.

I suppose the first thing to note is that ALL PhD work is supposed to be breaking some kind of new ground. Granted, some will be more significantly new than others, but being the first to study something doesn't really make you any more qualified for a PhD as the point of a PhD anyway is to show that you can make a significant and original contribution to the scholarship.

If some kind of appeals process (if any are open to you - make sure you ask if there's any extra work or whatever that can be done to turn your MPhil into a PhD, like an extra year or two) doesn't work, then I doubt there's anything more you can do. Time spent fighting the decision is likely to just be time you could have spent moving on to a new job or a new PhD or something. It really does suck to work so hard on something and to not get what you hoped for, but sometimes it happens and you have to roll with it. An MPhil is nothing to sniff at, anyway.

Good luck.

Masters dissertation query
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Quote From helebon:
Thanks. Yes, they say 3 weeks before the deadline is better for them but also ok to email it later but it may take longer to respond. I wonder if I email it 3 weeks before the deadline then they will focus on spelling errors, the structure of sentences and paragraphs rather than the content itself. For example, have I covered all important sections and if my argument is strong enough.

From what I have been reading it's best to write the introduction when all other sections are completed. The other thing is I don't want to sit around wasting time doing nothing, waiting for the feedback. I will carry on editing my thesis. So by the time I get the feedback I may have improved the thesis quite a bit. thanks.


If that's your concern, then again, it doesn't hurt to ask! Maybe when you send it along, include in the email a few questions - "does my argument make sense in X section?", "do you think my argument in X section is going in the right direction?", "am I missing out any key theorists you can think of?". Ultimately, proofreading for spelling and grammar isn't the best use of their time - anyone can do that, like a parent for instance.

If in doubt, just ask. Your supervisor is there to help you. Or should be, at least.

As for the introduction, I like to write the introduction first as it helps me warm up into the writing. However, I always come back to it at the end and usually end up rewriting it completely. No harm in writing something just to ease your mind into the topic.

The Dreaded Theoretical Framework
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It can be very tricky and it's really easy to get caught in circles in your thinking.

I'd suggest every now and then re-reading bits of your core theoretical texts. Remind yourself of exactly what points they're making, and what kind of analysis they think is fruitful.

When using a theoretical framework, I'd say you're usually using it as a lens through which to analyse the text. For instance, a postcolonial framework will take an event/text/person/whatever and analyse how it impacts and is impacted by postcolonial concerns (obviously, depends on which theorists you're using specifically). So you might be looking at how the response to X event silenced the voices of the women affected (as a very brief and crude Spivak example). The key then - and where I find it gets hardest - is to take that one step further: the 'so what?' question. You need to then be able to answer what further implications that analysis has on the event, the field of study, what we could learn for the future, whatever it may be.

That is, unless the point of your paper is to justify/prove/expand upon an existing theoretical framework, in which case you'll be doing a bit more of the other aspect you mentioned - using the texts to validate the theory.

I'm sure you knew all that, but I always find it helps to start my thinking from square one every now and then.

Why did you leave/are considering leaving academia?
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Hello everyone

I'm conducting a survey to see why people have left or are planning to leave academia, specifically psychology. If you could complete this really short questionnaire I'd be very grateful and if you could link it to other people you know who have left I'd be even more so. Thanks for your help.

Kind regards

PsychBrief

Survey: https://www.surveymonkey.co.uk/r/ZRS982G


As I'm not a psychologist, I'll refrain from taking part in the survey.

However, you'll probably find the following:

1) No progression beyond PhD once complete, due to a lack of available posts as a result of lack of funding for post-doc positions (oversupply of PhDs with respect to research or academic positions);

2) Fixed term contracts for research positions, leading to a lack of financial and employment security with no guarantee of continued employment once contract draws to a close - the financial issue prevents people starting out on the property ladder or easily obtaining a mortgage / home loan);

3) Lack of routes into academic tenure once researchers are ready to move into acadeic posts proper;

4) Lack of consistecy of leadership regardless of position (PhD student, researcher, academic), varying from very good to downright awful (I for example found myself in dispute with a senior academic I didn't start, provoke or want - that was my end);

5) Low level of pay compared to some private sector positions.

I'm sure people can think of more. Those I mention are from a UK perspective though other nationalities will probably recognise most or all of the above.

Ian


I hear these reasons all too often - sad state of affairs we're in.