Ask for help to improve my proposal

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Happy new year, everybody! I’m writing my proposal for my PhD application (City University of Hong Kong). I just finished the draft yesterday. I’m wondering if anybody here can help me to improve my proposal. You know, I’m Chinese. It would be much better to edit my work by native-speakers. Any comment about language or argument or anything else will be greatly appreciated. Thank you very much. :$

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:-(

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If you post something up people will likely help.
Though very few people are likely to have time to offer a free editing service....

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Why don't you post it up and see if anyone can help?

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You do know though, I am sure that forum content is archivable and searchable on google, so you may want to keep all of that in mind. Otherwise I guess you can go ahead.

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Thanks for your reply. But I think it's too long to post on the thread. and I'm willing to pay for it though the payment is not so high. If anybody would like to help me, pls send PM.

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