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Hi,

I am working on a 25 page philosophy paper for my MA and seem to have hit a road block. I am comparing two political theories (each have their own book). I finished writing out the comparisons and my arguments, but I am having a lot of trouble focusing my thesis because of the length of the paper. I began this paper with a more general thesis and clear outline, but I seem to have so many arguments now within each section. Now I have multiple versions with different paragraphs that I can't piece together into one cohesive essay. Does anyone have any ideas or strategies for completing it? I just need it to get to a finished product. Any advice would be greatly appreciated!