Thank you TreeofLife!

Hey all, I have to write a 1 page personal statement for a scholarship application at the University of New Orleans. The prompt is: describe my goals and future plans. I need a little help with editing and I'm wondering if what I wrote answers the prompt. I feel like I'm focusing too much on my career goals when I should be focusing on other topics in my essay also, but I'm not sure what else to write.

Unfortunately my essay is too large to post here, so would it be possible for me to private message it to someone so they can have a look at it?

Thanks in advance guys!