Thanks for your reply. But I think it's too long to post on the thread. and I'm willing to pay for it though the payment is not so high. If anybody would like to help me, pls send PM.

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Happy new year, everybody! I’m writing my proposal for my PhD application (City University of Hong Kong). I just finished the draft yesterday. I’m wondering if anybody here can help me to improve my proposal. You know, I’m Chinese. It would be much better to edit my work by native-speakers. Any comment about language or argument or anything else will be greatly appreciated. Thank you very much. :$