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I would like to update about recent developments since some fellow with a similar situation may face with in the future (hope not):
Supervisor and head of the department also got pretty angry about the comments of the external. She accused me for having political agenda and some other personal attacks. Supervisor wrote a letter to the phd committee about this and mentioned there will be some changes in the thesis accordingly with what external commented, but asked for a different reviewer to read the thesis.
Has anyone in this forum faced with a similar situation - change of the external?
She does not mention it. Just she told there are repetition and to avoid it one third (at least!) must be cut. I mean, there may be repetitions but I am no fool to repeat same things for 150 pages.
This is a highly political decision. I guess who the reviewer is and she is like the lawyer of an ethnic group which my thesis focuses and you need to be really strong to criticise something about that group. She is an extremely political person and does not like the general ideas, though she can't oppose most of the material as they all have proper footnotes.
I really need the help of fellow redditors. My university does not have a classical viva, but instead they send it to an external and internal reviewers. One of them said "it is an extraordinary and brilliant work" but the other put a huge effort to find mistakes and sentence by sentence asked me to clarify lot of things. At the end she recommends four points, but I do not know if it falls within a minor correction, major or revise and resubmit. My thesis advisor doesn't help much on this, but told me I can do it within a month. Not sure though.
Recommendations:
Show a well focused research question and find a focus for work.
Cut [it] by at least a third to prevent unwanted repetitions. (She asks me to cut 150 pages!)
Find the right links between the theoretical study material and empirical study material and between the historical information.
Go over the text again and root out all of the mistakes and the incorrect wording.
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